Caligula's Launderette

Hello Mr. Everyone, Welcome to YWS, dear, considered yourself SPEWed. When I read this, it seems almost fragmented; as if the three stanzas are actually three different poems, there doesn't ...

Was this originally centered? Because your linebreaks seem all off to me in this left alignment. But beyond that, I really like this poem. My favorite parts: It scribbles away ...

Hi carelessaussie, I actually like your rhythm, it feels like a slow, waltzy dance to me. First, is Rounding (L1) a proper word in this context? Well, I guess it ...

Um, but the symbol of the pig is huge! The central motif in The Lord of the Flies is the pig's head on the stick, stuck in the ground like ...

Erm, nothing at the moment. If I'm dead, I'm dead. - Tis , Grave Girl What is your prefered mode of transportation?

Experimently is all well and good, but when I need a pick-me-up I always go back to my old favorites. - Izzy , Grave Girl If someone recommends something, sure ...

Hello Pandora. (I can call you that, can't I?) I think you have the start of something, you present to the reader, a narrator that we could relate to, would ...

The rain. I like the rain. It's comforting in it's own way. - Bram If you must know Mann gegen Mann by Rammstein. *rocks out* - Tis , Grave Girl ...

This is very much a story poem, with some prose stuffed in. Thursdays It must be Thursday. I never could get the hang of Thursdays. - Arthur Dent , Hitchhiker's ...

Probably Tis. She's freaky like that. - Faith What kind of parent would you make?

*huggles Hughes* I admit, I cried. :cry:

Just a thought: people come together because they have a common enemy. I share the same taste in nuts as many, many people do; that doesn't mean we have any ...

Too Darn Hot or Musings on Romance The first misconception I have found about the romance genre is that people think it's all about sex, purple prose, and heaving bodices. ...

It totally made sense, Sam. :wink:

Hey hon, Welcome to YWS, to reitterate what others have said, if you have any questions feel free to ask. CL